2011年9月21日星期三

Write Place

I have been to write place twice during these two weeks. First time, I worked on my philosophy paper about moral problem. Second time, I worked on my racial paper. They helped me to fix problems of my gramma and vocabulary, my papers become much better right now.

2011年9月8日星期四

Leo's topic

I am willing to do punctuation in presentation. Becasue I have been to write many times, one of the biggest problems in my gramma is comma using. I am usually glad to write a long sentence, but sometimes I cannot make my sentence to be clear since I use comma unsuitably. So that, in this presentation I will do comma using to explain how important the comma is. My partner in presentation is Hanqiong Chen.
We make a powerpoint and focuse on four different area.
Three Basic Comma Rules
Three Main Comma Rules

Three Other Comma Rules

Unnecessary Commas

2011年9月1日星期四

Evaluation

I am in group 2, and our criterions are:

1. 12 objects. (5 points)
2. Interest. (4 points)
3. Story makes sense. (3 points)
4. Story flows. (2 points)
5. Grammar/Spelling. (1 point)

The class final criterions are:

1. Creative use of the 12 items. (5 points)
2. Interest. (4 points)
3. Organization/Structure. (3 points)
2. Flow. (2 points)
1. Grammar. (1 point)